Dimensional Clash: The Invisible Hand

Super squid yes this is our plot

TheRandomRingmaster wrote:Is noone concerned about A mutated human being, ingesting magical growing serum?

This is a legitimate concern, what if she cries?, She'll spill ADAM from her tears and now all the Wonderlanians in inclusion to being mad, are now super strong.

DOES NOONE SEE THE ISSUE OF CRAZY STRONG ANIMALS!?

Let me run over precisely which animals were a part of the gang that Alice was with in her sea of tears...

The interspecies exchange program. I think I can go over points of that that can be interesting for plot points in that location.

Teedler wrote:The interspecies exchange program. I think I can go over points of that that can be interesting for plot points in that location.

Yeah. It's definitely something I want to visit since it sounds interesting.

So confession time. I have checked out the manga and anime. I find it interesting, but it's questionable content wise

Teedler wrote:So confession time. I have checked out the manga and anime. I find it interesting, but it's questionable content wise

I figure as long as it isn't straight-up hentai it should be OK. Les Mis had prostitution, sex, and other nasty things, yet we still did that in VI.

Okay it should be fine. I'll looking into the specifics of it and maybe grab a few links

Teedler wrote:Okay it should be fine. I'll looking into the specifics of it and maybe grab a few links

...first chapter of the manga is snake masturbating...

I think we'll focus on the public facets of human/monster relationships instead of the intimate ones...

Yeah, plot point of the bill is humans and monsters can't do the do. Though I think by avoiding the main character and his harem should remove that bit. However the main case worker enjoys dumping new characters into the protagonist house

ill try to set up a time to better explain my thought process. But in short I assume that our human characters wouldn't be able to act as him stays given how they don't have anything proving who they are or houses.

I wanted the tourneymaster to give the explanation when we got to the F-Zero universe, but ok, I'll let this one slide.

I mean who's to say characters can't say, "yeah we know."

Teedler wrote:I mean who's to say characters can't say, "yeah we know."

I don't mean to stifle your writing or anything, it's just at the moment I was kind of unsure how to respond. It's all right, though.

Also are we going to have a giant squid?

We can.
The mention of severa was an attempt to give Cordelia something to say

Is there anything in particular that you guys want to do in Wonderland?

ToadRopes wrote:Is there anything in particular that you guys want to do in Wonderland?

I had a notion of Slapstick and Pyro getting shrunk down, and meeting the flowers.

And the flowers would be rude and Slapstick would walk away in a huff.

Then those two trumpet flowers would dump water on him and he would go after them with garden shears and trim there pedals

Oh Slapstick would have to go through a trial to prove his innocence, and he'd constantly change roles prosecutor, witness, balief


So yes I have a few plans

I particularly want to see Dipin and Ryle run into the the hatter and hare at one point, to jam a weed whacker.

We'll definitely have to do both of those things, then. Oh, what a wonderful day.

Should Ryle and co investigate fire pillar?
If we want to save a fight with father for later, how would daddy o respond to learning he's from a children's show?

Teedler wrote:Should Ryle and co investigate fire pillar?
If we want to save a fight with father for later, how would daddy o respond to learning he's from a children's show?

Let's save the confrontation with Father for later; you and Jawlord have stuff that you want to do, and I need time to develop what I'm doing for Father anyway.

On the topic of fourth-wall breaking, Father would probably become very angry and confused because to him, the world of Codename: Kids Next Door is very real. He would become flustered, and then furious, since he doesn't like naughty (and he uses the term very loosely) children.

Post is on the way I got set backbecause I was in the middle of composing it when my computer shut down and erased my work

It will be up soon 6ish

I was thinking of holding off having Ryle meet father. I thought it might be interesting to have Ryle pose as an adult super villain to figure out what's going on.

I'm Thinking about bringing the Klowns in, not now of course

Thoughts?

TheRandomRingmaster wrote:I'm Thinking about bringing the Klowns in, not now of course

Thoughts?

NECESSARY: SLAPSTICK VS KLOWNZ.

Teedler wrote:I was thinking of holding off having Ryle meet father. I thought it might be interesting to have Ryle pose as an adult super villain to figure out what's going on.

That would be pretty interesting, though the people who knew him prior would soil the whole ruse.